苏州英语写作的一些技巧和方法

来源：苏州学为贵雅思培训学校时间：2019/10/7 16:16:01

　　雅思写作比文言要难得多，文言拿8分没那么难，但写作拿到7分几乎要上天了。许多小伙伴习惯于用模板，但模板容易与别人重复，还不如学习技巧来得妙。今日，小编给咱们整理了一些写作简练的小技巧，get！
　　下面咱们就来看一些比方，体会一些写得并不成功的长句和怎么批改的建议

　　好办法一：避免空泛的单词和词组
　　1.一些空泛的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，彻底可以被删掉。
　　比方：When all things are considered,young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents,in my opinion。
　　这句话傍边的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。彻底可以去掉。改为：
　　Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。
　　2.有些空泛和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换
　　例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。
　　“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的比方，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：
　　Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have now。
　　好办法二：避免重复
　　1.尽量避免重复运用相同的词汇。或许有的时分虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时分可以做一些简化的工作。
　　例如下面这个比方：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。
　　large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：
　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。
　　更简练的表达方式为：
　　My grandfather grew up on a large farm。
　　2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简略的单词来替换
　　例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents&0#39;farm。
　　这儿的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简练：
　　My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents&0#39;farm。