如何在雅思写作中用好定语从句

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宁波新航道教你如何在雅思写作中用好定语从句

1. 首段改写题干：

* 替换基本无意义的套路性时间背景，如Nowadays, .../In modern society, ... 。

例：Nowadays, human beings are being replaced by robots. => Human beings are being replaced by robots, which can be commonly seen recently. 【低配版，适合5.5以下学员】

* 用定语从句描述本文核心对象的特征（需与后文的讨论有关联），让主题更鲜明。

=> Human beings are being replaced by robots, which are considered to be more efficient than even a skilled worker. 【进阶版，适合6分以上学员】

2. 让步段段末反驳（衔接反驳段）

让步段基本完成，已讨论完观点的部分合理性，需结束本段并引出下文的反驳，可使用 ... , which is not always the case. / ... , which is not the whole story. / ... , which seems to be far too shortsighted. 等句型，表示“然而事实并非总是如此”等含义。【进阶版】

例：… . This may be explained by people’s expectation of an improvement in perceived easiness resulting from using technology, which is not always the case.

3. 因果衔接

* 强调结果：... (结果/句子), which may be caused by ... (原因/名词).

可用替换：... , which results from ... . / ..., which is commonly seen as a result of ... .【低配版】

* 强调原因：... (原因/句子), which may result in ... (结果/名词). 【进阶版】

* “因=>果=>果”结构中减少过于频繁出现的常规因果衔接词：

例：Because children often have less experience and therefore less awareness of the adverse consequences, they can hardly take sensible precautions. Hence, they need the help from parents so that they can understand and manage risks. => Children, who often have less experience and therefore less awareness of the adverse consequences, can hardly take sensible precautions. Hence, they need help from parents, who understand and are more able to manage risks. (并不必把所有的常规因果衔接词都替换成定从，此二句仅为句型示范)【进阶版】

4. 举例

* 例子无名称时：

... (论点). For example, ... /For instance, ... => ... (论点/完整句), which can be proven by the fact that ... (例子/完整句)

例：Teachers have only limited influence on students, which can be proven by the fact that students studying in the same class differ considerably in terms of their academic performance as well as characteristics, because they do not share the same family. 【低配版】

... (论点). Evidence can be (readily) found/seen in ... (地点), where ... (例子/完整句)

例：Teachers have only limited influence on students. Evidence can be readily found in a schoolroom, where students share the same teachers, but their academic performance as well as characteristics differ considerably, because they do not share the same family. 【进阶版】

* 例子有名称时：

A good example is ... (例子的名称/名词), ... (对例子的解释/名词) , who/which ... (具体发生的事件/完整句).

例：A typical example is Wang Sicong, the son of a famous Chinese entrepreneur, who has become notorious for his sexual harassment of and cyber violence against a female streamer recently.

可用替换：A typical example is ..., ... , who/which ... . / A case in point is ... , ... , who/which ... . / This is true, given the example of ..., who/which ... . 【进阶版】

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