佛山新航道雅思作文范文精选

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雅思作文范文精选：

Task2

The best way for the government to solve traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Do you agree or disagree?

思路解析：

本题属于雅思大作文中的同意与否题型，讨论的是政府类话题—交通拥挤。

首段进行简单的同义改写，然后明确表达自己不支持0元交通解决交通拥挤问题的观点。

When it comes to the issue about how to tackle traffic congestions, some people may argue that the best solution is to provide citizens with free public transport all the time. However, as far as I am concerned, such solution can hardly work.

第二段可以让步一下，指出这样做的好处–减缓交通拥堵。

Admittedly, free transportation could function to reduce traffic congestions because people would decrease the use of private cars.

段末不忘话锋一转，强调弊大于利。

Nevertheless, there exist more drawbacks than benefits acquired from free transportation.

第三段来讲个弊端：财政压力。

To begin with, the government may face more economic burdens if public transportation is free.

段落中可以论证拨款不均影响其它重要民生领域的发展。

Providing that the government allocates too much money to public traffic, other parts of services, such as pension for the elderly and the disabled, may not be well supported.

第四段是第二个弊端：没必要全天候0元。

Furthermore, providing free public transport all the time could lead to a waste of resources.

本段论证可以突出非交通拥挤时段没必要实施0元政策

Apart from the commuting time, free public transport does not make sense because there is no congestion at all.

尾段小小总结，概括一下没有拥堵就没有必要提供0元交通，财政可能赤字的观点就好啦。

In sum, providing free public transport all the time may not be the best method to tackle traffic congestions, considering that there is no need to provide free transport when there is no congestion and the government may face financial deficit as well.