托福独立写作范文-应该听取谁的建议

来源：沈阳环球雅思学校时间：2021/5/7 9:36:28

	　4月24日托福独立写作范文：应该听取谁的建议？这道题也比较贴近生活，大家可以根据自己的真实想法展开相关论述，虽然是同意与否题型，但其实暗含两种方式方法的比较，即“从年长的朋友处获得建议”与“从同龄朋友处得到建议”哪一个更有价值。

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	　　Friendship has been cherished throughout the history of all cultures, and has become even more indispensable with the growingly fierce competition. After all, only by heeding more valuable advices from our friends, our competitive advantages will be maximized. Some people trust older friends for their wisdom while others prefer listening to the insights of their peers. From my perspective, it isdefinitely more valuable to consult with older friends.

	　　Firstly, older friends are better equipped with expertise and certainly more resourceful in academic performance than those friends of your same age. With a more systematic and comprehensive education, older friends are more intelligent to help you tackle a great variety of obstacles confronted by you. Besides, people become more compassionate and empathetic if they have experienced similar dilemma or difficulties that you are struggling with, so you don’t have to confront the misunderstanding or even judgmental attitude from novice in the field.

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	　　What’s more, advice from older friends are more constructive when it comes to social and interpersonal skills. Sooner or later, we need to learn how to interact with professors, employers, partners of all kinds, it is hard to imagine that your peer group friends would be as insightful and visionary since they are definitely less experienced and sophisticated compared with older friends. Older friends are also more strategic in their thinking, thanks to prioritizing all kinds of tasks to fulfill objectives, which makes their suggestion unique and efficacious.

	　　Admittedly, some people argue that in this era of information explosion, even 3-5 years of age gap would make it harder for people to empathize with each otherthoroughly, let along seeking advice from much older friends However, the ubiquity of information does not and will not alter the paramount core values and principles. What defines us and shapes our characters are timeless charisma, ingenuity and wisdom. Consequently we will always be depending on eminent minds of our older friends to be a more inspired, motivated and joyful individual.

	　　To conclude, older friends and their advice are big assets. By interacting and mimicking them, we would be able to incorporate more resources, experiences and inspirations and stay away from confusions, blunders and frustrations.