长沙那些失败的雅思作文开头你中枪了没

来源：长沙新航道出国雅思学校时间：2019/11/21 10:01:46

　　雅思写作考试如果开头没写好，那么会给雅思写作思路带来影响，影响雅思写作提高的重要因素。我们要注意哪些内容呢？
　　开头一：中式英文，人见人晕
　　典型失败案例：
　　Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life.
　　In our life,there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
　　Topic 2-The population problem
　　The population problem is a very big problem.For example,in the city centers of Shanghai,we can always see people mountain people sea there.
　　Topic3-Is there fairness in today’s business world?
　　I think in today’s society,there is no fairness in the business world.For example,I always chopped when I go out buy things……
　　Topic 4-The advantage of being a nice person
　　Being a nice person have many advantage.I believe if a people always do bad things,he will get“baoying”.

　　开头二：废话连篇不知所云
　　典型失败案例：
　　Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
　　This topic is very interesting.I’m very interested in talking about this topic.Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
　　修改方案：开门见山，直奔主题
　　In my opinion,it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.
　　Topic 2-Will modern technology,such as the Internet,ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?(雅思真题)
　　Ok,this topic is a very good topic.First,let me tell you a story:I have a friend,he likes go on the internet very much.Every day,he uses internet to read news or play internet games.So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.
　　Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
　　Oh,this topic is surely very important.Isn’t it?Of course!It’s really very very important!

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