位置:烟台新航道雅思托福培训学校 > 学校动态 > 雅思写作知识点分析(第92期)
雅思写作知识点分析(第92期)
来源:烟台新航道雅思托福培训学校时间:2021/10/24 13:59:36
雅思写作知识点分析(第92期)
应对
The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone.Do you agree or disagree?
这道题目
学生写了这样一句:
What’s more,if people adore foreign businesses much more than native businesses,this poses a negative influence on our local brands,which is also the reason why some are not in favor of the opinion.
借这个句子提醒各位小烤鸭一句,一定要注意措辞是否学术正式噢!
adore:爱慕(某人)或很喜欢(某物)[informal]
教师修改后如下:
What is more,if people favour foreign businesses rather than local ones,this is likely to have a negative impact on local economies.
将非正式用词adore换成favour后,大家是否发现much more than也换成了rather than,原因在于favour本身不仅表示“喜爱”,它的具体含义是“更喜爱,偏爱”;
句子中名词不重复,用ones替换,foreign businesses rather than local ones;
native(adj.)belongs to one by birth
local(adj.)is from or in a nearly location
pose a threat/danger/problem造成威胁/危险/问题
have a negative impact on产生负面影响
※this is likely to相较于this poses措辞更严谨,语气没有那么。
小总结:
中文含义很接近的单词,一定要区分清楚差别噢!
尊重原创文章,转载请注明出处与链接:http://www.peixun360.com/171/news/426846/违者必究!
以上就是烟台新航道雅思托福培训学校 小编为您整理 雅思写作知识点分析(第92期)的全部内容。