一、雅思写作经典范文模板 In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this. In many countries,the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children.These children are often spoilt,not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this,but in more material ways.They are allowed to have whatever they want,regardless of price,and to behave as they please.This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from. When they get to school age they have not learnt any self-control or discipline.They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation.But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families,who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children.If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social,responsible individuals,the whole community would benefit. Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this,and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.The government should fund this kind of parental support,because this is no longer a problem for individual families,but for society as a whole. 二、写作评分细则 雅思写作评分细则2——连贯与衔接（Coherence&cohesion） 该评分标准旨在考察考生组织文章以及连接信息和观点的能力。几个注意点如下：1)进行分段2)句首中心句3)使用连接词或短语来连接段落和句子 雅思写作评分细则3——词汇变换（Lexical Resources） 此项评分标准考察考生写作词汇的多样性&准确性。几条小建议：1)注意学习同义词2)学习词伙(collocation)，而非一个独立的单词3)使用正确的词性4)写完一定要检查(检查拼写错误，丰富语言)5)正确使用一些不常见词汇注意：考官并不会看你词汇或观点的创新性，而是有效、准确地阐述! 雅思写作评分细则4——句式多样性和语法准确性（Grammatical Range&Accuracy） 此项评分标准考察考生写作语法的多样性&准确性。语法的多样性发面方面，请关注：时态，比较级，条件句，情态动词，被动语态的使用。同时也请注意使用复杂句，注意整篇文章简单句和复杂句用量的平衡。注意，标点符号使用错误也会失分!不过，并不要求考生做到无误，但控制错误率很重要!考官将会根据这些错误“影响信息交流的程度”酌情扣分，而非“错误的数量”!
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