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支招小作文（136） | 柱图 澳洲就业人数

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【2023.4.1小作文真题】
The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008.

柱图：反映数据之间的对比关系
【细化对比】
1. 同项目不同时间：2001年对比2008年（以sales为例）。
2. 同时间不同项目：以白色柱子（2001年为例） sales 对比computing和nursing
【开头段】
The bar chart shows how many employees were recruited in five categories of work in one region of Australia. Two historical years, 2001 and 2008, are investigated. 
☆ 首段需说明【图表大致内容】。题目中给出的时间状语，可以在转述时拆分开，写成单独的一个句子。
☆ 划线部分使用同位语成分
☆ 词汇小结
recruit v. 招聘
historical adj. 历史的
investigate v. 调查
【主体部分段】
The realm of sales draws immediate attention, as the largest number of people chose to work as a sales representative in both 2001 and 2008, with 155,000 and 165,000 respectively. Likewise, starting at approximately 60,000, both the numbers of staff in the fields of computing and nursing experienced growths. Specifically, one rose moderately by 10,000, while the other grew significantly to nearly 80,000. 
☆ 第1句，原因状语从句。
先总结销售人数特征，即前后两个年份，均为人数较多。
☆ 第2句，开头的地方是动词分词词组的“悬垂”现象，作为句子的状语。
然后，接着对比同为“增长”的另两类工作；较后，在第3句话中细化对比各自的变化程度。
☆ 词汇小结
realm n. 领域
draw immediate attention 引人注目
likewise adv. 同样地
【主体部分第二段】
As for the remaining types of work, there were 65,000 accountants in 2001, almost three times as many as farmers. Afterwards, the year of 2008 saw a fall in both two categories, with the figures decreasing by 10,000 and 5,000 respectively. It is also worth mentioning that farmers were always the least sought-after profession.
☆ 第1句：起始年份-2001年，会计和农民的人数对比。
☆ 第2句：终点年份-2008年，两类工作的就业人数均减少。
☆ 第3句：补充重要数据特征：农民数量始终较少。
☆ 词汇小结
accountant n. 会计
sought-after adj. 广受欢迎的
profession n. 职业
【结尾段: 对数据特征的宏观综述】
Overall, the difference between the two years varied from sector to sector, and the high employment rate in sales stands out.
☆ 词汇小结
sector n. 行业
stand out 引人注目