雅思写作的衔接词你真的会用吗
来源:合肥新通雅思托福培训学校时间:2020/9/26 10:05:04
如果问雅思考试四个科目中头疼的是哪一科?十有八九的小烤鸭会答:写作
如果再问,为什么头疼?答案就可能五花八门了,比如没有思路,比如词汇不够,比如语法不好,句子写不对,遑论变化和复杂度。却很少有烤鸭意识到,即使观点扣题,词句准确,也可能和心仪的分数失之交臂,只因为:句子和段落之间衔接不当。
看到此处,有小烤鸭邪魅一笑,不就是衔接吗?加衔接词啊!例如:
转折连接:however, nevertheless, on the other hand,
因果连接:because, due to, therefore, hence, so,
递进连接:besides, in addition, moreover,
举例:for example, for instance, such as …
so easy! 分分钟9分,这有什么好说的。
等等,衔接词倒是真的列了不少,但你确定你真的用得对么?
衔接词误用导致的语法错误
a. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction. Because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives.
错误点:
because是连词,不可单独成句。
正确的句子:
The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction, because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives.
(选自剑7Test3Task2书后范文)
b. Governments ought to restrict advertisements for harmful products. Such as alcohol and tobacco, however, they do not have the power to control other forms of advertising.
错误点:
a.such as 后加同位语,不可单独成句;
b.however是副词,不可连接两个句子。
正确的句子:
Governments ought to restrict advertisements for harmful products, such as alcohol and tobacco. However, they do not have the power to control other forms of advertising.
(例句选自考官范文)
衔接词误用导致的逻辑错误
Some people support that education should help students become useful to the society, because students will have more knowledge after being educated.
错误点:
学生受教育,变得有学问这个点和教育应该培养学生贡献社会没有明确因果逻辑关系,使用because这个明显因果逻辑词,前后句逻辑混乱。
正确的句子:
Education should make students useful members of society because education is financially supported by the government and students who make use of the resource should repay the society.
句子间的逻辑:
因为政府资助了教育,所以教育应该培养对社会有用的人,回馈社会。逻辑通。
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